Writers Jam

An orange (or an onion)

by Ananya
55
2 weeks ago
The One That Got Away

A poem I hold in my hands

Like an orange (or an onion)

I can’t say

What do I know of analogies and metaphors!

As for the orange (or the onion)

I hand it over to you

To prod/ to peel/ to slice

To do with it whatever you like.

Half-way through the process

Of peeling layer by layer

The textured skin, a map of sorts

As the fruit (or the vegetable)

Starts to unravel in your careful hands

Starts to come undone at the seams

And you notice a prick

And the eventual welling of tears in your eyes

Sorry I gave you the onion

The pungent wretch of a thing

The orange, in its sweet, citrusy fragrance

Bustling with bottled sunlight

And tangy-sweet whispers of the earth’s generous bounty

I reserved for someone else

Who might just toss it carelessly away (Like it doesn’t mean a thing)

In search of a better fruit (or a vegetable)

Like I said

I know nothing of analogies anyway.


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Anonymous
this is written so cleverly. harsh truths gift wrapped in a teasing tone: > Who might just toss it carelessly away (Like it doesn’t mean a thing) > In search of a better fruit (or a vegetable) god i love when poems do this
Reply 2 weeks ago
sid
"And tangy-sweet whispers of the earth’s generous bounty".. Lord almighty!!! This is astonishing. I love how this very line bridges between entities dwelling in the poem, so effortlessly. Beautifully written
Reply 2 weeks ago
Asima Firdous
This is so profound
Reply 2 weeks ago
nav
good god!!!!!
Reply 2 weeks ago