Writers Jam

mujhe ghar jaana hai

by nidii.
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1 month ago
You Can Never Go Home
Notes: self hate, death, mention of the word 'abuse', mental health

just the other day
my classmates were joking around
asking me "where do you live?"
when one of them said "jaante ho yeh sabse bada dukh h, tum bade maja lelo, lekin sabse bada dukh h"
(rough translation: you know this is the greatest sadness, no matter how much we make fun, this is the greatest sadness)
and he's right

he's right because few will live through
the identity crisis this brings
when every two years the boxes come out
and in goes almost everything.

he's right because when i think of home,
the ink runs out before i use the pen
because the only constant is change,
and its just a matter of when.

he's right because my family has tried,
in their own innocent ways, to personify a home,
but then why is it difficult for me
to now recognise warmth in flesh and bone.

he's right because my best friends' faces
have now been memorised as pixels,
and if we had stayed in the same place
maybe it wouldve been easier than whatever this is.

he's right because home is where the heart is,
but how can my home be here,
when my heart is in a different geographic coordinate,
when i have to wait months, if not years, (only for now hopefully)
for it to be near.

he's right because yes, i tried building
a home in myself, brick by brick
but i share it with my mind,
abuse had never been so fiercely domestic.

he's right because at the end of the road
nobody knows what lies after
the uncertainty fuels my anxious
my mind's breathing becoming faster.

he's right because maybe you see
your home in the earth or the flames
but since when have guests tucked you into your own bed
preaching about how your life wasn't in vain.

he's right, he's right, he's right.
i hate to admit it, but yes, he's right.

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"when every two years the boxes come out and in goes almost everything." This hit really hard ! Ive personally moved a lot growing up. This piece makes me feel nostalgic. I had to give up so much each time. Hated it. But much later I realized I got so much more than if I had stayed a bit longer. (Glass half filled ?) Loved it. It spoke strongly to a part of me that was slightly forgotten !
Reply 1 month ago
Anonymous
amazing work! also very sad, but still cool
Reply 1 month ago
anonymous-
i hope diwali ki holidays pe aap ghar jaa sako:)
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